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Longtail icon by wanton-fox Longtail icon by wanton-fox
Icon sized gif (50x50) - [link]
Please give credit if you use it, besides that it's free!

This is an icon of Longtail from SSS warrior cats episode 3 part 1

If you haven't watched the video yet, you really should!
video: [link]

Poor guy's in rough shape here, but that's what you get for messing with Firepaw :iconbadassplz:

Original animation - Yuji
Coloring and icon - me
Enjoy!

Edit - no I did not STEAL from SSS warrior cats, I AM part of SSS warrior cats lol
You can read the description in episode 3 if you want to see my name

Edit 2 - I'm sorry the animation isn't perfect, these are 3 frames from an animation that's over 15,000 frames! We didn't spend much time on each specific scene, I just thought you might enjoy it as an icon haha, a small, 50x50 icon, where the amount of detail criticized on does not really matter xD
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:iconkunichiminamino:
First time writing a Critique, but this little animation really stood out to me. More so after I watched the video. (I think I read that it was based off a book? I might have to look into that. If so, I know the next book I'm reading!)

Anyways, back to this. I really think that this is well done. It's fluid and you can see the emotion in his eyes. I also like the character design.

Looking at the other artist's critique though, I have to agree about the blood. I know that animating might be hard, this blood just looks weird. It should be more of a splatter. However, I can forgive this because I like that gradient.

I also have to point out a few tiny inconsistencies in the coloring where you can see dots of white or other colors.
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All and all, Great job!
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I don't doubt that you've all worked very hard on getting episode three done for your copious amounts of rabid fans, and I admit myself that I was elated to see it finished. But there are a few problems that I'd like to point out.

First, I'd have to say that Longtail's left ear juts out very far from his head. Not only that, but in reaction to pain and apparent intimidation, his ears would be flattened back, not perked up.

The flow of blood is well done, but I take note of a very noticable jump of bloodflow back where his fur tuft covers part of his ear. Teeth clenched = blood stained on his ear. Mouth open = blood suddenly runs down to his head. I may not explain it really well, but you can see what I mean at the base of his ripped ear.

On the topic of said ear, you had a bit of a problem keeping the rip in it consistent in the episode. Continuity is difficult, but even a rip in the ear like that should be pretty easy to keep.

As for the blood running down his face, this is probably the biggest problem; blood is not a clear fluid. Pus and saliva are. I can see Longtail's symmetrical markings under the blood, which we should not be able to see. Additionally, his vision in that eye should be obscured due to the the amount of blood running over it.

Overall, it's well animated, shows a lot of emotion, but is jumpy. Could also use some touching up here and there with the blood.
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:iconinsanitydragon2000:
iNSaNiTYDragon2000 Featured By Owner 6 days ago   Artist
OMG SWEET!
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:iconeretia:
Eretia Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2015  New member Student Artist
Uh, Longtail ya got a little blood on your face there, XD. Anyway.... You are amazing simply amazing at what you do. Keep it up!
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:iconforestfalllightclan:
ForestfallLightclan Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015  Student General Artist
I watched the video- its amazing! Good job!
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:iconwarriorcatzfurlife:
WarriorCatzFurLife Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2014  New member Hobbyist Traditional Artist
HOW THE HILL DID YOU FRIKING DO THAT :O:O:O WOW Definataly in meh Favs! ;D
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:iconplimarki:
plimarki Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2014
This looks great! But just wondering, how did you make it into the appropriate size of  an icon? If like to do that with an animation I have.
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:iconphoenixmaster13:
Phoenixmaster13 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It woulb be WAAAAAAAAAAAY better without the blood
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:iconskyclawthewolf:
skyclawthewolf Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2014  Student Digital Artist
They wanted it with blood that was their choice not yours. Also I believe with the blood it looks more cool.
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:iconphoenixmaster13:
Phoenixmaster13 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I know but its just disgusting
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:iconskyclawthewolf:
skyclawthewolf Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2014  Student Digital Artist
If you thought it was "disgusting" then just scroll down and move on. It ain't that hard.
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:iconphoenixmaster13:
Phoenixmaster13 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I didn't think it was bad. I liked the animation
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:iconplimarki:
plimarki Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2014
Then why put an icon in the comments below saying "No!" And some cuss words? It takes them a while to do these animations, I just don't see a point in doing this.
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:iconphoenixmaster13:
Phoenixmaster13 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
go away
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:iconplimarki:
plimarki Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014
I'm just saying what you put before was not needed. If you're going to do criticism, at least do it appropriately. 
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:iconfoxsightthehedgepony:
foxsightthehedgepony Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014
Is it ok if I recolor it and make a base out of it plz?
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:iconphoenixmaster13:
Phoenixmaster13 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ew
:iconhellnoplz: :iconhellnoplz:
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:iconjewel-kits:
Jewel-kits Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
may i use for page doll? 
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:iconcr33py4rmie5:
Cr33py4rmie5 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014
That's like WHOOAAA (in a good way XD)
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:iconreewie:
reewie Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Using e v e
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:iconxxisraphelgalxx:
XxIsraphelGalxX Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
is there a base for this animation??
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:icongliskor:
Gliskor Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
temporarily using
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:icondragonstarclaw:
dragonstarclaw Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ow that has got to hurt *puts bandaid on it* their all better
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:iconmagnus-mak47:
Magnus-MAK47 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014
Every impressive
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:iconscourgeheart29:
Scourgeheart29 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Can i use it? PLZ!!! :3Dog Face
Itz a total must have!!!! Toothless
PLLLLEEEEEEZZ!Mew La Plz :flame: :excited: Raichu la plz Bulbasaur la plz Charmander la plz Cyndaquil la plz 
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:iconmonster90227:
monster90227 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Student Filmographer
can i use this a a profile picture?
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:iconmellowmoon01:
mellowmoon01 Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Student General Artist
can I use him as mah profile pic?
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:iconfaiienleaf:
FaIIenleaf Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
Used! :3 
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:iconromannumural:
RomanNumural Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Why did SSS stop doing their animation Warriors animation?
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:iconchyconi:
Chyconi Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014
they didn't they started doing it every year and besides animation takes up to 2-4 months!
and I found out in some youtube comments they said Aluri resigned it....
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:icongerbilnator:
Gerbilnator Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I don't think they did. Animation just takes a long time.
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:icongirlteammcmadison:
GirlTeamMcMadison Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Used :3
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:iconanimal983:
Animal983 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
nevr mind wont work
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:iconanimal983:
Animal983 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
btw i think longtail is silver
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:iconanimal983:
Animal983 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
can i use this for meh webcam?
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:iconlunarcollar:
LunarCollar Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
USING
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:iconlunarcollar:
LunarCollar Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
NVM :3
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:iconmoonrise09:
Moonrise09 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Student General Artist
Yup. Don't mess with Firepaw.
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:iconmagnus-mak47:
Magnus-MAK47 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014
Isnt that the cat from the warriors series?
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:icondashiecatkittyartist:
DashieCatKittyArtist Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cool
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:iconcrazywhiskers202:
crazywhiskers202 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014

Can I use this for icon?.

Neko Emoji-05 (Rolling) 

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:iconlunarcollar:
LunarCollar Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
How do you use this? Sorry I'm a noob.
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:iconmiswarriorcatlover12:
miswarriorcatlover12 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
May I use this please  :)
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:icondragonsrule2217:
dragonsrule2217 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
ive seen it its amazing

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:iconaskmal:
AskMal Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Student General Artist

:iconepicclapplz:

:D

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:iconzoetrentlover123:
zoetrentlover123 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013
So cool. :iconcoolplz:
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:iconwanton-fox:
wanton-fox Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
:iconbadassplz: the coolest 

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:iconkirathezoroa:
KiraTheZoroa Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
using!
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:iconwhispershahh:
whispershahh Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
using as my icon
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:iconwanton-fox:
wanton-fox Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Cool C:

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:iconwhispershahh:
whispershahh Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:)
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:iconwhispershahh:
whispershahh Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
used
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